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Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
Answer:
The hero's journey applies to an ordinary person showing the steps that led that person to reach a goal and how it brought experiences into his life and shaped his personality.
Explanation:
The hero's journey is a term used to describe the story of a character in the search for a certain objective. The hero's journey allows him to expose all the experiences that the character had during the pursuit of his goal and how it shaped his character and personality.
This story can easily be applied to an ordinary person of ordinary life, because anyone has goals that should be pursued and that need not be grand goals, but it has the power to modify the vision and the inner self.
You answer will be a Fantasy because it is saying a story with superheroes and superheroes are a fantasy.
