(The lightning thief) would be the book that I would be giving an example of . . .
(Rick Jordan) is the author of this book.
In each line if this book, they explain further of each step that Percy Jackson is going to make. They explain how and what he likes to do and what he want's to do.
Hope this helps and provides and example on what you need help with. ~Jurgen
i'm pretty sure it's true but you don't necessarily have to organize your text to revise it. You could just look over the text and edit misspelled words for it to be considered revision. I hope this helps.
