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Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
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Odysseus was right when he decided to keep his decision to sail toward Scylla a secret form his men because if he hadn't, they would have been frightened and convinced him to turn around. What does Eurylochus say to persuade Odysseus' men to slaughter and eat the cattle of Helios, the sun god?
Wumbo is the antonym of Mini, so it means abnormally large, or huge. Fun fact, there is a science now called "Wumbology" that studies anything that is large in nature, or anything that tends to be large. Sadly, it ended in 2003, where the chief scientist, Professor Alexander James Hurteau decided to shut it down.
