Explanation on how to answer:
Read the story and figure out whats missing. Without the whole story, no one can tell you what important part is missing. Find the section that that excerpt is from and see what the differences are, or post the full story.
Answer:
The key to building suspense is making readers care about characters they slowly learn more about.
1.) "At a glance"
2.) "The enchanted distance"
Explanation:
Nope, there shouldn't. As freedom is our freewill. When the word freedom is included there must not be any criteria or limits of it.
