You should try to add adjectives. For example:
1) The hardworking farmer
2) A gorgeous lady
3) The playful puppy
4) A mysterious detective
Just suggestions. :)
The author of "Zlateh the Goat", Isaac Bashevis Singer, was a Polish Jewish author. In the story, not only are the main characters Jewish, but also the story is set around Hanukkah (and contains references to specific Hanukkah traditions and preparations), an important Jewish holiday. You should also note that the text was initially written in Yiddish, which is a dialect central to Jewish (especially Ashkenazi Jewish) culture.
I'm not sure how many errors you are looking for but, this is what I got:
My Father and I, have already several states this month.
I really only see one error. Father should be capitalized because Father is a title of a person. I would also say the "I" should always be capitalized but, it looks like you already got that. Everything else seems ok.
The intended audience is the American people.
