They didn't pack enough supplies and didnt follow the trails
Awkward, the first one :)
Allusion
Alliteration= occurrence of a letter, we don’t have that.
Allusion=expression designed to call something to mind without mentioning it explicitly. ‘ an allusion to Shakespeare’
Onomatopoeia=sound associated ‘ sizzle’
Simile= needs words like or as
The use of the comma here is incorrect because t<span>hese are two independent clauses and should be separated by a semi-colon or a period not a comma. Hope this is what you are looking for. </span>