A contains an error: "and then she publishes them under a false name" is an independent clause and should have a comma before it.
B contains an error, as the comma should be before "but", not after it, for the same reason as A.
C correctly shows what should have been done in A and B.
D should not have a comma after "but".
C is the correct answer.
She makes it clear how much of a toll killing has taken in Neville
Answer:
I do not know the answer because I did not read the passage.
Explanation:
In Why, You Reckon the narrator and the other man don't hold Edward for ransom because they just were interested in the money he had.
I would say the motivation for not doing so was external since they were hungry and taking the time for holding Edward would have taken a lot of time.
Answer: raises
Explanation: rises is not the correct verb for this, just read it aloud. :)