I think the incorrect pronoun shift would be the line "<span>before you adopt a pet". I think it should be before one adopts a pet. This is because the sentence started with "It is". The "you" made the sentence very confusing. The second pronoun should be singular, the pronoun you is often denoted as plural and not singular.</span>
Every Day is about the story of A, a person who wakes up occupying a different body each day. As described by Frank Bruni of The New York Times, "After going through some trouble, A is finally able to convince Rhiannon of who they are, and the phenomenon they experience every day."
(The person is named A)
Answer:
When you start feeling angry, try deep breathing, positive self-talk, or stopping your angry thoughts. Breathe deeply from your diaphragm. Slowly repeat a calm word or phrase such as "relax" or "take it easy." Repeat it to yourself while breathing deeply until the anger subsides
Poem isn’t my best but i did try my best:
i hear others squealing and complaining.
i feel the strong gusts of winds flown at me.
i taste that bitterness in my mouth, the same taste when i’m nervous
i look down and see that everyone is the size of ants
i hear the ride creak forward
and we plummet down to earth as the roller coaster takes off
maybe use this as a base and improve it on your own :)