Answer: I think it's incorrect, because they put a comma at the end of her sentence. It had a '...' already there, so why put the comma? Just what I think. I'm not entirely sure, though.
Explanation:
The journalism industry flourished in America following the Civil War period.
Harry is an excellent president.
I hope this helps, if is incorrect im sorry
A conjunction can be placed after the comma to make the sentence make sense (i.e. and, so, ect).
Answer: Dear friends name,
You should join my charity group because (name all the great qualities you charity group has and what you charity group is doing to raise money). Then talk about who you will be helping or how you plan spending the money.
Explanation:
Mostly just keep on reminding them on how good it will be and how they will feel great about raising all that money for a chosen charity.
Hope this helped :)