It would put an enthusiastic vibe throughout the piece. So an excited feel I guess.
When reading the story a lot of things start building up to create this suspenseful moment, and the story Structure helps cause this suspense.
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No, I don't believe so. A thesis statement usually doesn't use the word "because" in it. But, as I've said (I've told this to the owner of the question just so no one gets confused in the comments), I'm not good at ELA mate.
Wait- thesis STATEMENT. Meaning it's the CONCLUSION of the paper, so, yeah NVM, it's right mate.