Answer:
1: I know I'm not an ordinary 10 year old kid, They say I must be one of the wonders/ of god's own creation
2: "We're all going to take very good care of August," She said to Mom, laughed as she came to my mother/ know this child will not suffer
3: When I looked up at her, Mrs. Garcia's eyes dropped for a second, People see me/ I'm a challenge to your balance
4: I have some medical mysteries that doctors never really figured out, and as far as I could see they can offer/ No explanation
Explanation: Just did it :)
I think deleting first person will make it sound more professional
You didn’t even capitalize Make what is wrong with you you freak
An
example of the poetic technique called metonymy from the poem “I knew a
Woman is: "These old bones live to learn her
wanton ways”.
Metonymy refers to the replacing of the name of an adjust or
attribute for that of the thing meant.