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Can someone check and help me make my essay better its about discussing their experience working at Texas Health tech Institute doing blood drives, health majors such as medical assistant, medical technology billing, answering phone calls, and analyzing data as it relates to Sociology.
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Volunteering at the Texas Health Tech Institute. Medical healthcare aspect of (the study of how people act towards each other) is simple but complex of studies of the effects of social and cultural factors on health and medicine. There specialists as a medical (expert at how groups of people relate to each other) is to help people view the healthcare system as facility of the (community of people/all good people in the world) and serve it by examining and improving all its parts/faces. It is a big step towards to (accomplish or gain with effort) the greatest major's opportunities in the history of medical careers.

Medical (expert at how groups of people relate to each other) applies (related to careful studying or deep thinking) and (related to thinking a lot about what things mean to you) skills to help the healthcare facilities improve the conditions of patients and people (who take care of people). This may be through conducting research on the social factors affecting healthcare, providing education to people (who take care of people) and working with people to prevent sicknesses and speed up the recovery processes. It combines both medicinal and people-based aspects to offer effective solutions. The (the study of how people act towards each other) of health and illness focuses on the social effects of, and public attitudes toward, sicknesses, sicknesses, mental health and disabilities. This sub-field also overlaps with (the study of getting old) and the study of the (old/allowing to get old/getting older) process.

Medical (the study of how people act towards each other), very differently, focuses on the inner-workings of medical organizations and medicine-based institutions. In Britain, (the study of how people act towards each other) was introduced into the medical (school courses) following the Good enough Report (1944). [1]Medical helpers do regular medicine-based and (related to managing and running a company or organization) responsibilities under the immediate supervision of a doctor or other healthcare professional. Medical helpers do many (related to managing and running a company or organization) responsibilities, including answering phones, greeting patients, updating and charging patients' medical records, filling out policy varieties, managing agreement, planning assignments, arranging for hospital (act of letting someone enter/speaking the truth about something bad) and laboratory services, and handling billing and book keeping.

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Volunteering at the Texas Health Tech Institute in Medical healthcare  has provided material to   study the way in which people act towards each other and to study the effects of social and cultural factors on health and medicine. There , the medical staff ‘s main objective is to help people view the healthcare system as a facility for the community. The aim of the volunteers is to become part of this staff to study the way in which the staff works and to be able to help the Institute improve the healthcare system. This will be for the volunteers one of the greatest opportunities seen  in the history of medical careers.

The volunteers closely study what the medical staff does at the Institute.  The medical staff uses their skills to help the healthcare facilities improve the conditions of patients and people. This may be through conducting research on the social factors affecting healthcare, providing people with information about healthcare and working with people to prevent sicknesses .In this way , the recovery process will be sped up. The work of the medical staff combines both medical  and people-based aspects to offer effective solutions. The focus on health, illness and the effect of these on society will cause changes in  public attitudes towards sicknesses, mental health and disabilities.  For example, this focus will help the old get older. The staff are studying this group of people to help them live longer.

Examining what medical helpers  do at the Institute is also helpful for volunteers .These , unlike the medical staff , focus on the inner dynamics  of medical organizations and medicine-based institutions. In Britain, the management of medical institutions was introduced into the medical school- course syllabi following the Good enough Report (1944). [1] Medical helpers do have to take up regular medicine-based courses and  learn about their responsibilities .  These courses are given under the immediate supervision of  doctors or other healthcare professionals . Medical helpers have many duties including,   answering phones, greeting patients, updating and charging patients' medical records, filling out policy varieties, managing agreement, planning assignments, arranging for both  hospital and laboratory services. Handling billing and book keeping is also part of their job.