"The depletion of water resources is a worrisome trend that impacts much of the world," insisted Dr. Sutton.
As far as I can tell, the only mistake is the end of the quote, where the comma should be within the quotation marks.
The conflict is the character is not happy and feels like not many people are happy and can stay happy where they are. The character is sad about the conflict.
D. Leslie ran to the door, greeting his mother with open arms.
Marks by ones I thought Squeaky is insulted when Mr. Pearson suggests she give someone else “a break” this year. Squeaky doesn’t even ...