Answer:
Add clear and logical transitions between ideas and replace words and phrases with other that are more concrete
B. Older animals are usually surly and ill-tempered.- That can be a sentence in itself as well as the second part. Accordingly it is unwise to attempt to pet a grown raccoon. All the semicolon is doing is combining two sentences to make them one.
The four parts of this conversation between two classmates indicate Frank's goals are:
"Well, I’ve only been an average student in high school, but I’m excited about college because I can choose all of my own classes."
"I want to work in cyber security. So, I’m going to work with the counseling staff at my college to make sure I’m taking the correct courses. " "I also want to get involved in soccer."
"I figure I can stay in shape and meet some new people that way."
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