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Nina [5.8K]
4 years ago
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Read the following scenario and then answer the questions below. Submit your answers in a separate word document. Terry just rec

eived an assignment back from his instructor. Unfortunately, Terry received a failing grade for the assignment. Terry is extremely upset because he worked hard to try to complete the assignment correctly. He quickly finds his laptop, logs into his email, and sends the following email to his instructor: why did i get a 0 on my assignment?! i worked really hard! I am just not understanding what went wrong to get that grade and am freaking out……can u respond asap? i need this grade to be changed. 1. Rewrite: Use what you have learned regarding academic and professional tools/resources and rewrite Terry’s email message so that it is professional. 2. Explain: In 100 words or more, explain 2-3 tools and/or resources that helped you revise Terry’s email message.
English
1 answer:
Ganezh [65]4 years ago
7 0

Answer:

 Re: instructor

 Subject: Exam Grade.

Dear instructor,

I am contacting you to discuss my exam grade. I am really stumped with the grade I received and would like to know the reason why my rating was 0.

I have really worked very hard to take this exam and was expecting a higher grade. That is why I need to know what has gone wrong with my answers so that I can improve or perhaps do a review in case it was a mistake in the correction.

Greetings you sincerely,

Terry.

Explanation:

  At first look, we can see that Terry is writing an email that is too informal, without a structure and with a language that is not appropriate for the person who is going to receive it.

Therefore, what must be improved in this email is its structure, its language and the way in which it is expressed towards a superior.

The way to write a formal email correctly is as follows:

  • Think carefully about the subject of the message
  • Make a timeless greeting adapted to the recipient
  • Synthesize the content to the maximum
  • Don't forget to say goodbye
  • Sign the mail
  • Before hitting 'send', check your message
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