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A mock review is a pre-submission grant review. The goal of the mock review (and reviewers) is to provide comments on a proposal.
A subordinate clause is the one which cannot exist outside of the main, full, complete clause, it cannot exist on its own.
So, the subordinate clause in this sentence is 'that ran between two commercial buildings near the downtown area'.
Answer: First, you need to come up with a thesis statement in your introduction paragraph. Something like ''Teens shouldn't be able to play dangerous sports.'' Center the paragraph on that and state your arguments in your introduction sentence.
Then in your 2-3 body paragraphs; have arguments to support your thesis statement. ex. Illnesses accompanied with dangerous sports
Then in your conclusion sentence restate your thesis and your argument points.
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Sorry I can't write it for you but I hope this helps.