Thats a lot of stuff I don't have much time sorry, I know that the action in 18. is Jumped though
I think talked is a different noun for spoke
<span>He was having a fun time with you're uncle at the beach.
The mistake is this sentence uses "you're" which means 'you are'
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<span>He was having a fun time with you are uncle at the beach
makes no sense.
The correct sentence is </span>
<span>He was having a fun time with your uncle at the beach
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