Answer:
ok but like add a reference
Explanation:
referencs
Explanation:
1. Al Gore gave a long boring speech but he won the prize.
2. Starbucks wants to open new stores in China, they do business's all over the world
3. Social network sites will definitely charge business, they are very popular.
4. Scientists are working with stem, they will revolutionise it as a medicine.
5. Whiting house is an important local monument as it was built in 1856.
6. Bono signed autographes at Tower records yesterday, he is a famous Musician.
7. The Queen will open a new hospital she will open it in Jarvis Street.
Answer:
(1) in the coolest home in the world.
(3). there is no way on earth I would want to do that.
(7) created electricity for him to recharge his
laptop.
(8) all over the world
(10) At this point in time
(11) "smell the roses."
Explanation:
Editing is described as the process of altering the text of a document or written piece in order to make it more precise, clear, and coherent.
In the given paragraphs, the six errors related to word-choice, abstract language, wordiness, or clichés are as mentioned above. In the first sentence, the word 'coolest' exemplifies a slang while 'there is no way on earth I would want to do that' reflects the use of 'abstract language.' In sentence 7 and 8, the words 'created', 'recharge', and 'all over' demonstrates the wrong word-choice. The sentence 10 displays wordiness in the use of phrase 'at this point in time' and the last sentence in the use of 'smell the roses' reflect 'cliche.'
