They had prosperous economy(great progress in agriculture, commerce, and handicraft industry) and flourished in science and technology such as developments of compass, gunpowder, and movable type printing.
Better because we have less slaves and less racist people and less hate
Answer: Is their supposed to be a picture ?
Explanation:
1. change they're to their
2. change an a
3. delete the comma after workhouse
4. add a comma after computer
5. change too to to
<span>Predictable Paragraph Organization: </span>To maintain optimal coherency, organize paragraphs in the way that readers are accustomed. For example, unless there is a compelling reason to do otherwise, place the topic sentence in the first position of the paragraph. The topic sentence appears in the first position of the paragraph 80% of the time in expository writing. Because of this high percentage, readers expect the main idea of the paragraph to be in this position. Similarly, the thesis statement appears 50% of the time as the last sentence in an essay introduction, so follow this practice as well.
Additionally, the Ancient Greeks developed the rhetorical rules for our writing, and these rules dictate that the most important idea in any communication needs to be stated first. Organize paragraphs with customary and traditional structures to be considerate to your reader.
