Gatsby met Dan Cody on Lake Superior, where Cody was out with his yacht, the Tuolomee, and Gatsby rowed out to warn him of inclement weather. He had changed it at the age of seventeen and at the specific moment that witnessed the beginning of his career--when he saw Dan Cody's yacht drop anchor over the most insidious flat on Lake Superior.
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I like the first better. I like how you gave a description of how the previous military officer felt. It let me feel what he is going through.
Explanation:
Answer:
"The building reminds me of a campground I’ve been to, because the plumbing was primitive."
Explanation:
This is an experience the student has gone through themselves, and they are referring to it within their text.
My friend, Alex, plays tennis.
My = possessive pronoun
friend = subject
Alex = an appositive (which is a noun that renames another noun right beside it) -- though not an adjective, it functions like one to explain which friend
plays = verb
tennis = direct object
hope this helps :)