well the holocaust was very graphci but changed a lot of people
Good start. make sure when someone is speaking put the question mark in the quotations or any other puncuation in the quotations. check over commas. Ex. he said, "hello." check spelling. check puncuation. over all good story. great job.
Explanation:
<h3>Red was angry with Texas Joe for disturbing his sleep for no apparent reason Narrator's Perspective: Explain how you know.</h3>
<h3>Red looked across the prairie. He didn't see anything concerning He wondered why Texas Joe had hollered like that. Texas Joe turned to him. </h3>
<h3> Now he felt crazy. "You have to believe me. Red. It was just here," said Texas Joc Red scowled at him in disbelief. "What was just here</h3>
