Comprehensible
Eloquent
Intelligible
Understandable
Rational
Logical
Organized
The purpose of a hook is to catch the readers attention, Instead of keeping the essay plain and boring.
If it’s online school:
Hello Mr/Mrs. ____,
I regret to inform you that I was unable to do my assignments today. I know it is no excuse, but my WiFi has been extremely bad lately and we plan and getting a new provider soon. At a time like this, pretty much everyone in the town/city is using the WiFi and it’s causing it to go extremely slow. In fact, earlier today my WiFi shut off out of nowhere and yes, we have payed it. I have siblings and they are also trying to do their homework assignments and go into their zoom classes; which of course, causes it to go even slower. We even try to have everyone else in the house to not get on the WiFi if they’re not doing any school related things, but it doesn’t seem to work. I’m truly sorry for this roadblock that has come up. I’m not sure if this email will even send or when it will send. When/if it does, is it possible that you can give me an extension or?
Thank you.
(Sorry it’s not so creative lol)
