Answer:
I perched on my seat, as I revved up my engine. I was anxious waiting for the race to start,as soon as I heard the horn my car zoomed,and I was gone. It was a convoy of race cars battleing for first place. Some cars seemed dwarfed compared to the rest of them.
I was steering around in my car just hitting the final lap. There was one car ahead of me, so I revved up my engine in hopes of cattching up. I was so busy trieng to win I hadnt noticed the obvious sign I was pushhing my car over its limits. As I was cutting it close with the other race I heard a loud pop. I tried to steer my car,but it began losing control. I looked up only to see the wall. Then everything went dark
Explanation:
I'm sorry if this was to much,or it wasant what you needed. I am only in middle school and tried to sound like a highschooler.
Answer: concept: I have no concept about what it is like.
Transition: We were forced into a transition without being prepared for it.
Flair: Anna demonstrated her flair for drama.
Answer: B
Explanation: B because if you can't prove your information then your expository essay wasn't ivestigated deeply enoulgh and needs to be revised if you want a better grade.