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hello, miss/mr sandy burns, it may seem like your planning to build a very lard housing development near a lake that's used for fishing and swimming, i think what your doing is a great idea, but what would happen if the lake goes bad like, it has gutter, plastic, bags, etc, and it could cause alot of bacteria, so can you maybe think twice about this?
If the "books" wasn't a plural, it would be "his" but since it isn't singular, it would be "their"
This would be "Rising Action." Most problems happen here.
Think of it in movies. Your ACTION is because of a CONFLICT two characters are having.
