Gordon should revise sentence 1 to provide specific details about what "struck" him as he first entered the room.
Explanation: Read the paragraph from Gordon's personal narrative.
1 When I first entered the room, I was really struck by what I saw. 2 It was my first day of cooking lessons, and I was on my way to fulfilling my dreams of one day becoming a chef in my own world-renowned restaurant. 3 I had spent countless hours of my childhood watching my parents, both professional chefs, prepare savory meals for my sisters and me. 4: From them, I had already obtained a solid foundation of cooking basics. 5 : However, it was in this room that I would build upon those basics and begin my ascent as a chef in my own right.
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Explanation:
That does not mean they might be incorrect though.
Gandalf gets Beorn to shelter thirteen dwarves by bringing them in two by two while he tells an exciting story. ... the mention of the dwarves being attacked by Goblins eventually interests about the dwarves. Beorn doesn't like Goblins or the wolves.
