The most important rules is to use perfect active voice,link ideas with a conjunction, us a comma to connect two ideas as one,use serial commas in a list, use past perfect for the first of two past actions,because if you use this examples you can be better to communicate with others
Long-term effects of eating junk food
Eating a poor quality diet high in junk food is linked to a higher risk of obesity, depression, digestive issues, heart disease and stroke, type 2 diabetes, cancer, and early death.
At the beginning of the story he felt confused and scared. He was trying to figure out if it was all a dream or if it was real. He asked his mother and found out it was not a dream. And when he found it it was true he thanked his mother.
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