Answer: Yes, it just needs more body!
Explanation: I like the plot line, if you add more excitement to the story via adventures then I’d say you have a nice book going!
1. She never buys luxurious items because she does not have enough money.
I skipped 2 sowwy
3. It was peaceful at home until the dog started barking at a squirrel.
4. The medicine wasn’t effective, so the doctor switched it out for a different kind.
5. There’s something breakable in the bag, so you handle the bag carefully.
6. First impressions are important because it shows how you act towards another person.
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