Which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague?
We hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today.We sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym.We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.<span>We stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track.</span>
Literary nonfiction uses many fiction-writing teachniques
Cannot help without the picture or the stanza!
The second choice is a fragment, not a complete sentence.
I believe the correct choice is number one, because if you turn the sentence around, it answers the question of why the crowd is gathered. You may want to confirm on the website chompchomp.com (Grammar Bites).
