It does... but how about you replace the last line with "they remained the hosts". If you did that, I would say change line 3 to ghosts instead of ghost.
Hope that helps!!
An effective argument uses evidence, because if you are being bias, it isn't helpful.
Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones feels sorry for Roger because she sees him out alone late at night with his face dirty. She understands that he is not a hardened criminal. He is just a kid who made a bad choice and has no role models.
What is the question, so I can help better?
