I don't see anything wrong with traveling
<span>Della was so excited to have the combs she had wanted, that she momentarily forgets she has cut her hair. She cries as she realizes she will not be able to use them. Sorry about how late this is.</span>
I would go with the introduction of characters and setting
-Hiadamcom
The house will be built by the construction crew in five months.
The construction crew will build the house in five months.