Question

Wolves, the beautiful animals that run like the wind and kill like soldiers, Don't get fooled by their beauty, They'll hunt you down like no other. Like all animals, wolves need a source of food. But how do they get this source? They have to hunt for it. Hunting for them is not just chase, bite and kill it is actually much more, it's a very complicated and dangerous event.
I have to write a research paper on Animal intelligence, we have to pick an animal and write about them, but it needs a thesis statement/question/purpose. I've tried writing about parrots and crows but I can't find any good info and I'm sorta stressing out about it. Would you say the paragraph above is a good start to my intro, I need to figure out a thesis statement for it. My topic is How Wolves hunt.

Answer 1

A good format for a thesis would be: "Wolves are intelligent animals because (reason 1), (reason2), and (reason 3). " Of course this needs research. I'm guessing all three reasons have to do with hunting.
What u have so far is okay but do not capitalize in the middle of sentences. Use "-" instead of commas in some areas. Do not use sentence fragments.
I would say research three reasons first, then write the essay. Look into how they use their sense of smell, how they have a system for marking territory, and their running ability, etc.
After writing the 3 supporting paragraphs, all u need is an intro and conclusion then BAM- u have an essay!