Answer:
A outline for your body of what you are describing is, you can start with talking about just example of sitting on the couch and seeing a mcdonalds add and then later getting mcdonalds, due to teenage cravings.
Explanation:
This could help to draw a reader in. Hope this helped
I believe the tone is somewhat dramatic based on the dialogue such as "shot his hand out in front of him", it makes the story seem a lot more interesting than what it really is; a normal encounter.
