Make sure you include all of the different ones such a s period or a comma and think of why you think it’s important like, “because if we didn’t have punctuation the sentences wouldn’t make sense and be scrambled” or anything else you can think of. Also take inspiration from actual newspaper articles. Hope this helps
<span>It gives us a significant glimpse into the narrator's mindset.</span>
1/4 (9y-3) + 1/8(6y+9)
(9/4)y - 3/4 + (6/8)y + 9/8
(9/4)y + (6/8)y - 3/4 + 9/8
(12/8)y + 3/8 = 0
(12/8)y = -3/8
y = -3/12
y = -1/4
D. Hook. It is relevant to trying to 'hook' or reel in your reader for a great catch. ;)
An example:
<em>The creak grew louder. I whipped around and out of the corner of my eye, a shadow danced. I twisted back. I heard padding feet behind me. Desperate, I turned in circles as laughing began.....</em><em> </em>would that be captivating? Or what about:
<em>Yesterday was ok. We went to get ice cream. I got stawberry. But it fell on the ground. </em> Wouldn't you want to immediatly put THAT book down?
From One Smartie to another- BubbleSmartie11
