While you are proofreading the text for grammar mistakes, you could evaluate the text by asking yourself the following questions.
What is the main idea?
What is the writer trying to say?
What rhetorical devices does the author use?
Did the writer organize his essay so that the reader will not be confused?
Was the writer able to bring about his point?
Did the introduction help start off the essay?
Did the writer conclude appropriately?
Did the writer use appropriate transitions to link ideas?
It will be hard evaluating and proofreading an essay at the same time as humans cannot multitask. I suggest doing them both separately.
The Danes, by returning to Herot display the anglo-Saxon value of loyalty as Beowulf battles Grendel's mother<span>.</span>
Answer: Eating is our source of energy and is crucial to our survival. If we didn’t eat for a time as short as three days, then we wouldn’t survive.
Explanation: this is just a thesis and the beginning to your piece, but it should be easy to build off of. Good luck!
