Answer:
Your essay is incredible. You used amazing vocabulary, and maintained an interesting story throughout. You used past memories, and also acknowledged the future which is great. You also listed the traits needed for this position and how you contain all of them, amazing job!
Explanation:
I truly believe that you have nothing more to add. It was very motivational and overall an amazing essay.
Good luck!
In English pls this might fall in the Spanish section
Chiaroscuro (I am not sure that is spelled right.)
