Answer:
I would say he needs to add some descriptive language.
Explanation:
Plz don’t report me I’m just trying to do my homework like y’all A.
The sun sets on the west, in the book the west is a symbol for death and ending.
Including too much information in a summary is a mistake people make while writing summaries, since summaries are supposed to be short however have a meaningful message, and include all the important information.
Hope this helped! :D
