<span>D.) Bring it back by the scruff of the neck. The truth is that once you have reached the station you will have brought it back about forty times. The plan is to not despair. Continue. Keep it up.</span>
I think that the revision that uses signal words to clarify the sequence of events of this excerpt from <em>How to Live on Twenty-Four Hours a Day</em> is C: <u>The process is to bring it back by the scruff of the neck. Ere you have reached the station you will have brought it back about forty times. That's right, do not </u>despair. Continue. Keep it up.
Explanation:
I think this revision adds the correct phrases to make the paragraph more clear for readers. With this new phrases, the excerpt chronologically explain the sequence that have to be followed, step by step.
