The correct answer is D. It is not a strong example of paraphrasing. It just rearranges the original words in a new order.
Explanation:
In writing, paraphrasing implies using the ideas of an external source and author and expressing them by using your own words, because of this a strong paraphrasing would change the language used but keep the essence and main points of the original ideas. In the excerpt presented, the author tried to paraphrase a passage that describes cone snails. However, in the passage paraphrased the author uses the same terms and words than in the original passage which means he or she is not expressing the ideas of the original passage with his or her own words but only changing the order of ideas the text and therefore this is not a strong paraphrasing and can even be considered a plagiarism as the same words and ideas are being used. Therefore, this text can be described as "It is not a strong example of paraphrasing. It just rearranges the original words in a new order".
Al though Social Media is so great for us to keep in contact with our friends, It really impacts the mental health of millions of teens today. Seeing your friends post pictures together, excluding you is so painful, and is the number 1 reason why I wish social media didn't exist. In addition, seeing beautiful models, and using filters to make yourself look better online, ruins your self esteem, standards, and overall image of the beautiful person you are. Don't let social media change you.
Time flies:clasue
forgive and forget:phrase
whentime comes to a stop:clause
before midnight:phrase
Esperanza and her mother settle in camp for Mexican farm workers. There are financial struggles, and they are also lacking acceptance. Mama gets sick and Esperanza has to rise against her circumstances to save her and Mama. There are terrible working conditions as well.
Answer:
you allocate one sub-topic to each paragraph .
Explanation:
i highly recommend that you write about your most interesting sub-topic in the first paragraph to create a hook to catch the person whom is reading it's eye
