The only sentence which has inappropriate shift in tense is A) Lauren laughed out loud after she listens to joke.
It should be <em>listened, </em>in the past, not <em>listens, </em>in the present.
Answer:
Btw about who are to taking.
I wish she would forgive you my daer
Graphic Adj.
The experience (The Ball Game) was described in depth and in great detail
"The Yellow Wallpaper" is written in first person point of view.