Question

Read the body paragraph of a persuasive essay about the need for teenagers to get enough sleep. Select the best supporting evidence to include in the paragraph. One reason schools should start later is that teenagers need more sleep. According to the National Science Foundation, teens should . However, teenagers have a lot of pressures and activities. It can be difficult for them to quiet their minds and get to sleep.

Answer 1

Use some statistics in it, or simple state what the pressures and activities are to help further your point on the last sentence. Also when saying according to the nsf teens should, further that sentence. Tell what teens should. It’s an incomplete sentence.