I am confused on what you are asking, but if you are asking if that is good sentence to put in your work i believe it is a great addition to your work, although you should fix the last sentence.
Answer:
He did not care about seeing his grandson.
Explanation:
Becouse the moment the time was up he wanted him out
The man is being questioned by two policemen.
This is the passive voice.
To express his gratitude for all the people who helped him after he arrived in New York
I hope this helps!
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