I would say it's too vague. The reader doesn't know the "coloring" mentioned, or which animal has the ability to walk on land. "Ear characteristics" is also very vague.
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This is a story about a young sailor who was said to be a dreamer due to the fact that he believed in an old but powerful and mythical legend. One afternoon in sunny day the young sailor was wondering around the sea looking for the mysterious fruit found in a mysterious island which no one had ever found. A little hope that shone in his body, his mind, and his soul. The legend was said that when the world of the demons will take over our world a boy will find a mythical island which will produce some unknown, mysterious yet powerful fruit, but in every power there is something that it wants in return it is said the sea will hate whoever had eaten that fruit because the fruit was only produce from the bottom of the sea. When the evil clouds starts to flow in the air like a sail sailing in the vast ocean the sea will sense the danger and rise the mysterious island which has it's fruit. But little did anyone know that the day when that would rise came nearer nad nearer every day. When that day came the sea was ferocious, the cloud were blood red. The sea sensed the danger it summoned the mysterious island and waited for someone to come and find it. Legend has it that a boy came and ate one of its fruit and gained power beyond humans limitations. He defeated the evil and the world was peaceful again or that's what they thought. The devils were gone peace and harmony flew in the air. But the sea still sensed danger that awaited. It is said that the sea still hasn't lowered back the mysterious island and the island still waits for another person to come and find the fruit or the treasure it holds.
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