<span>The example from ‘a visit of charity’ that slows down the pacing of the story is during the excerpt that reads or describes of how she wore a red coat with her yellow hair hanging down which are coming from her white cap, at the same time, all the little girls are wearing the same thing that year. It slows down the pacing of the story because it describes the appearance of the girl and how she is being differentiated or similar to the little girls. </span>
Answer:
Change the 'and' to 'but.'
Change 'a test' to 'any tests'
Explanation:
<u>You wrote:</u> My best subject is Spanish, and I haven't passed a test this month.
<u>After Changing:</u>
My best subject is Spanish, but I haven't passed any tests this month.
If you change it, it sounds more like you are unhappy about your Spanish skills and makes more sense.
Personification is when you give human like traits to non living items. (if you still cant figure it out, let me know and Ill help you out)