I, personally, agree with the statement 100%. Money has corrupted our world Due to any and everything costing some kind of currency, you cannot ask of a favor from someone without having to pay. Winning is almost the same and it is sickening to be quite honest, I cannot watch a basketball game without noticing how hard the players are trying to win, even harming each other to score a point. Sports are supposed to be fun and entertaining. People consider sports as a career, which, I do not disagree with the terms of sports being careers, it’s just that people are all in it for money and with money, comes greed. Greed starts off with the younger generations playing sports and were always trying to win. To impress. To show off.

(This is just my perspective and outlook.)

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3 years ago

What does 1st body paragraph needs to have

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First body requires a topic sentence, evidence such as quotations, how evidence compares to topic sentence, transition to second part of body.

second body requires you stating information pertaining to the thesis.

third body consists of any more information that you may want to add, also include your conclusion.

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3 years ago