Which sentence would best improve the description in the setting of a story?My grandmother used to tell me that dogs and ponies

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Which sentence would best improve the description in the setting of a story?My grandmother used to tell me that dogs and ponies

cheer up everyone.Blowing wildly, the icy winter wind tore my woolen cap from my head.The officials at the basketball game made horrible calls.The beautiful young girl danced for her mother.

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yarga [219] · Answer 1 · 2022-01-30T04:36:26+03:00

yarga [219]3 years ago

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The blowing wildly line

Zielflug [23.3K] · Answer 2 · 2022-01-30T03:12:31+03:00

Hello!

The answer should be the second sentence: Blowing wildly, the icy winter wind tore my woolen cap from my head, as it makes the most sense.

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The setting is the time and location of a story. (Where and when it takes place).

The first sentence definitely wouldn't improve improve the description in the setting of a story, nor would the last. The third sentence includes the location (basketball game), but does not describe it.