MacGregor suggests that The Great Wave reflects Japan’s feelings of insecurity and uncertainty at moving from isolation to increased trade. Because it is an island, Japan had managed to remain isolated for many years, but countries like Britain and the United States wanted to trade with it. Commodore Perry of the US forced Japan to trade, which led to Japan opening its ports to more trade. MacGregor comments that this time signaled a shift toward greater economic power for Japan.
Sample Response: MacGregor suggests that The Great Wave reflects Japan’s feelings of insecurity and uncertainty at moving from isolation to increased trade. Because it is an island, Japan had managed to remain isolated for many years, but countries like Britain and the United States wanted to trade with it. Commodore Perry of the US forced Japan to trade, which led to Japan opening its ports to more trade. MacGregor comments that this time signaled a shift toward greater economic power for Japan.
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