Question

Read the paragraph. 1. In conclusion, of all the possible careers in film, the producer’s job is the one that’s really cool. 2. Among its many prerequisites, the job of the producer requires creativity, leadership, and communication skills, along with superior organizational skills. 3. It’ll keep you on your toes, that’s for sure. Which is the best peer evaluation of the conclusion? The details and mechanics are good, but sentences 2 and 3 should be reorganized to include logical transitions. The word choice and style are good, but there are punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and 2. The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal style and objective tone. The tone and style are good, but errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation in sentences 1, 2, and 3 should be fixed.

Answer 1

The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal style and objective tone. 

The sentences in the passage do not have errors in grammar or punctuation, so any of these options can be immediately removed. Ending the first sentence with the word "cool" and using "that's for sure" and "you" in the last sentence, give the passage a much more informal tone. These sentences should be revised for a more formal tone to have a stronger concluding paragraph.

Answer 2

The correct answer would be the third one, The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal style and objective tone. 
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