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Alex17521 [72]
3 years ago
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High school graduates should be required to take off time before entering college. How can this thesis statement be improved? Hi

gh school graduates should be required to take off time to pursue community service projects before entering college. High school graduates should be required to take off one year to pursue community service projects like cleaning trash, teaching at an at-risk school, and building homes for the poor before entering college. High school graduates should be required to take off time to learn about the real world before entering college. High school graduates should
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2 answers:
maks197457 [2]3 years ago
5 0

The correct answer is D. High school graduates should be required to take a year off to pursue community service projects before entering college in order to increase their maturity and global awareness.


You want to create a comprehensive thesis statement that is going to cover all the information you are going to mention later on in the essay. The thesis statement is the most important sentence in an essay because it will give you the gist of what the entire essay is about, and here, that statement is sentence D.

Nutka1998 [239]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

This thesis statement can be improved in this way; High school graduates should be required to take a year off to pursue community service projects before entering college in order to increase their maturity and global awareness.

Explanation:

A thesis statement talks about the topics that will be presented in the paper, it has to cover them with a specific approach toward the kind of people that will read it, you need to get their attention and interest as well.

A thesis statement has to is a complete sentence that expresses the main topic, gives direction, points to the conclusion, states at the end of the introduction and takes a stand and justifies future discussions.

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