Sentence fluency is how a sentence is written and its flow to create a story. It is important because it does not create distractions for the reader and helps them focus in on the narrative.
The first sentence is the correct sentence
Answer:
The phrase that makes this thesis statement wordy is: electronic mail.
Explanation:
Wordiness refers to making something longer than it should be, that is, using too many words to express something. In the case of the thesis statement we are analyzing here, all words seem to be necessary with the exception of the final phrase. As we know, "electronic mail" is no longer an expression in use. It's been decades since it has been replaced by the shorter version "email", "e" standing for "electronic". Not only does using "electronic mail" make the sentence wordy, it also makes it sound old-fashioned.
The teacher will say that Cynthia did not make a good choice in source material because a nonfiction source would be more reliable.
Answer:
From the following test what I can gather about Jose is that he is jealous of his cousin.
Explanation:
He believes that Arnie is a spoiled brat that deserves all that he has, he wants to be Arnie or to be like Arnie. Jose's feelings of jealousy aren't misplaced. Imagine yourself in that situation, watching someone have everything that you ever wished to have, watch them be the person that you want to be, it would make anyone jealous.
