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Anarel [89]
3 years ago
14

What should be eliminated when revising an essay?

English
1 answer:
otez555 [7]3 years ago
8 0
Repetition of transitional devices as well as repetition of sentence structure could be eliminated. Transition devices should be different every time and if sentence structure is also the same it can ruin the flow.

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